Saturday, 18 March 2017

Analysis of Contents Page (Edit 2)


  • This edit is a continuation and progression of my last contents page edit. Unlike all my cover edits I didn't create a new idea, instead I just refined and modified my old one. First I changed the image. The previous one was badly edited using the internet, however this one was edited with Adobe photoshop so the shape of Seah is less distorted. Also the block pink background is now a lighter shade because I am striving for a rather pastel issue. This was how I edited the main image:

(Video shot with Quick Time Player, edited with Final Cut Pro X and uploaded onto youtube.com)
  • The dress which the model is wearing is actually a collaborative piece between Lazy Oaf and Disney. Disney produces games and movies among other things for children so I thought that this attire would suit the soft and child-like concept of this page.
  • I changed the font to Times New Roman to make the contents look more proffessional as I thought it looked a bit too childish or youthish when in actual fact Cherry Bom's audience is age 17-21. I contextually made some changes with spelling and grammar and I also changed the layout; in the previous edit, the contents page was discussing one spread and so in the bottom right corner it said "on page 20", I thought this might be a tad confusing and indicate that the contents page is page 20, to anyone skimming the page, and so I changed it.
  • I also decided to promote Cherry Bomb's subscription to the audience with free concert tickets because I had a picture that I took at a BeyoncĂ© concert, and the picture had lots of pink highlights and this accompanies the contents page well.


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